Author Archives
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Critique Group Will Resume in January 2019
The Critique Group feature of this blog will resume in early January of 2019. In order to keep the group going, I need participation. If people comment on submitted excerpts, I will be glad to continue posting them. Let’s hope… Read More ›
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Narrative Fragments
A fragment is a phrase that poses as a sentence but is missing either a subject or a verb. For example – “Went to the beach.” This phrase has no subject. It doesn’t reveal who went to the beach. It… Read More ›
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Critique Group Suspended
I was the only person who commented on the most recent critique group post. That must mean that the group has lost interest. I am suspending this feature for the time being. 0
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Critique Group – The Blind Seer (Rewrite)
Maybe he can’t not file for the right to fervently appeal where he’s at? Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Stronghold (Dalia’s Story) Part 4
So now you have a chance to rewrite it. 😉 Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Dreamer
It’s not rejection; it’s redirection. No. Get real. It’s rejection. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Dreamscape
Trust me, this does happen. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one aspect can… Read More ›
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Critique Group – A Dragon Destiny
When the research budget is small, you have to improvise. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Gatekeeper
Yes, sometimes rejection does feel like that. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Spectralight
How many mistakes can you find on that billboard? Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment… Read More ›