Author Archives
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Critique Group – Read, or the Owl Will Eat You
If it’s Tolkien, we must have a hefty serving of deus ex machina, right? Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Dust and Ashes of a Fallen God
Too many dirty, bearded men make for bad box office sales. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Love is Blind
Please conduct yourself properly. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one aspect can be… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Beautiful
I think it depends on which draft you’re working on. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short… Read More ›
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Search for The Astral Dragon – Part Two: Emotional Bonding
Let’s continue analyzing the beginning of this story, this time with emotional bonding in mind. Here is a link to the story’s first two chapters: Story Development – A Space Adventure This time we will look at the aspects I… Read More ›
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Search for the Astral Dragon Analysis – Part One
Let’s analyze the beginning of this story and see how it satisfies the suggestions I made for a good story launch: Here is a link to the story’s first two chapters: Story Development – A Space Adventure We will first… Read More ›
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Story Development – A Space Adventure
I am posting this beginning of my new story to discuss aspects of story development, which I hope will take place in the comments section. I posted earlier versions of it almost two years ago, and this is updated with… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Once Upon a Dragon
Yes, please. I’m sure it’s beautiful and informative, but the story gets kind of stuck in the mud. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Stronghold Part 2
I didn’t have time to come up with a funny image this week, so here is an “I got nothing” image. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Insanity
Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one aspect can be helpful. If you want… Read More ›