Critique Group

Critiquing session posts

Critique Group Will Resume in January 2019

The Critique Group feature of this blog will resume in early January of 2019. In order to keep the group going, I need participation. If people comment on submitted excerpts, I will be glad to continue posting them. Let’s hope… Read More ›

Critique Group – The Blind Seer (Rewrite)

Maybe he can’t not file for the right to fervently appeal where he’s at? Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole… Read More ›

Critique Group – Stronghold (Dalia’s Story) Part 4

So now you have a chance to rewrite it. 😉 Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short… Read More ›

Critique Group – Dreamer

It’s not rejection; it’s redirection. No. Get real. It’s rejection. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short… Read More ›

Critique Group – Dreamscape

Trust me, this does happen. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one aspect can… Read More ›

Critique Group – A Dragon Destiny

When the research budget is small, you have to improvise. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short… Read More ›

Critique Group – Gatekeeper

Yes, sometimes rejection does feel like that. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one… Read More ›

Critique Group – Spectralight

How many mistakes can you find on that billboard? Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment… Read More ›

Critique Group – Heaven Came Down

Since no one sent anything in to be critiqued, I am posting the beginning of something new I am working on. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. If you want to submit a manuscript for critique, please read the guidelines as well as… Read More ›