Maybe he can’t not file for the right to fervently appeal where he’s at? Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole… Read More ›
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Critique Group – Dreamer
It’s not rejection; it’s redirection. No. Get real. It’s rejection. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short… Read More ›
Critique Group – Dreamscape
Trust me, this does happen. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one aspect can… Read More ›
Critique Group – Gatekeeper
Yes, sometimes rejection does feel like that. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one… Read More ›
Critique Group – Spectralight
How many mistakes can you find on that billboard? Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment… Read More ›
Critique Group – Heaven Came Down
Since no one sent anything in to be critiqued, I am posting the beginning of something new I am working on. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. If you want to submit a manuscript for critique, please read the guidelines as well as… Read More ›
Critique Group – Prince of Rùn Earth
Well, your editor will probably force you to have believable motivation. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a… Read More ›
Critique Group – Anomalys
And that’s how you ruin a hero’s journey story. (It’s strange that Yoda didn’t talk backwards this time.) Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have… Read More ›
Critique Group – The Blind Seer
An author should be able to spell his own name correctly at least half of the time. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to… Read More ›
Critique Group – The Heir, the Prince, and the Traitor
We won’t toss your writing away, at least not very far. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a… Read More ›