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Critique Group – Prince of Rùn Earth

Well, your editor will probably force you to have believable motivation. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a… Read More ›

Critique Group – Anomalys

And that’s how you ruin a hero’s journey story. (It’s strange that Yoda didn’t talk backwards this time.) Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have… Read More ›

Critique Group – The Blind Seer

An author should be able to spell his own name correctly at least half of the time. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to… Read More ›

Critique Group – The Heir, the Prince, and the Traitor

We won’t toss your writing away, at least not very far. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a… Read More ›

Critique Group – Tuned on the Luthier’s Workbench

Or a nice glass of melonade. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one aspect… Read More ›

Critique Group – Out of Darkness

The order of the editor must end? Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one… Read More ›

Story Development – Search for The Astral Dragon

A lengthy excerpt from my new story, Search for the Astral Dragon, is below. First a bit of discussion: I decided to gear my new story toward young adults instead of middle-grade readers. That allows me more flexibility with regard… Read More ›

Critique Group – The Black Claw

Or maybe the editor could be a red pen with a seemingly unlimited supply of ink. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique… Read More ›

Critique Group – Stronghold Part 3

And sometimes my new writing. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one aspect can… Read More ›

Critique Group – Ninety Seconds

And then someone critiques your story. Don’t forget the critiquing guidelines. All I ask is that you post a comment about the submission below. Don’t feel like you have to critique the whole piece. Even a short comment on one aspect… Read More ›